That's an excellent and detailed answer! It clearly highlights the memorable experience and its impact. Here’s a slightly refined version for clarity:
"A memorable experience I had at work was during a recent trip to Yunnan province. My colleagues and I visited two cities consecutively. The first city was Kunming, the capital of Yunnan province, where we convened a conference involving primary, secondary, and tertiary level teachers. The conference focused on creating a cohesive plan for English language education in the region. We were delighted by the turnout, with delegates from Quynh Minh and adjacent cities.
The second conference was in the city of Dali, attended by pre-service teacher education experts from the region. We discussed how to innovate the existing master's level English language education curriculum. An expert from the University of Warwick shared his insights on pre-service English language teacher education, which was very well received. One delegate mentioned it was one of the best conferences he had attended. The positive feedback was incredibly fulfilling and a testament to our work over the past few years in China. It was a truly memorable experience."
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