Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Although people can have easy access to online learning resources, many still choose to acquire knowledge in the library. I believe that libraries are worthy to be built.
点评：这个说法很别扭
Free libraries can bring people together and thus enhance the community cohesion. Library is a good place for members in a community to study and interact together. Exchanging ideas about books together makes it possible for people to know more about their neighbors and make new friends. In this case, they can obtain a sense of community and live happier. Without a public library in the community, people can only do self-study and search the web for information at home alone, so they lose some good opportunities to socialize with others. That’s why technologically mediated life may cause people to become isolated and lead a lonely life in the long term.
点评：有些表达不是很好，members of community, live a happy life, technology-mediated, isolate people
Public libraries can benefit children’s development by providing them with colorful activities and programs. For example, some local libraries give children free tutoring to help them improve their levels of attainment, which can be extremely meaningful for those who cannot afford private tutorage. In addition, there are many volunteer programs organized by libraries every year. By getting involved in these activities, children are allowed to gain practical skills and valuable experience, which would make a huge difference to their working lives in the future and can not be achieved by online learning.
点评： 还是表达的问题，最后一句话先行词不清晰
However, some people argue that building libraries is a waste because they feel that the function of library can be substituted by internet. Some people do not go to libraries as often as before, because Internet can be an effective tool to study and save their time, while running and maintaining so many libraries requires large funds. It seems to be more economical to store books and materials in a digital way.
In my opinion, libraries play an integral part in our life and people should be encouraged to make the most of libraries in their communities. As community centers, libraries can not only provide us with numerous books and collections, but also benefit children and social members in many different ways. However, the number of paper books and collections should be reduced in libraries by introducing more computers and E-readers, so the cost of running a library can be cut.
点评：最后两段话可以放在一起，否则太长了，考场也写不了那么多
总分，7分，文章非常充实，论述具体，基本上没有语法错误，唯一要提升的是单词
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