Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?
It is hard for children to pay attention to their studies nowadays. I think there
are two reasons leading to
this phenomenon, and parents and teachers can help solve this problem.
点评：
two reasons for
Students nowadays feel pressured to study hard and they are unwilling to study at school. Teachers hold the view that students who perform well are able to find good jobs in the future and as a result, they tend to require students to finish a large amount of homework and to do self-study even after school.
点评：没有扣题
Another reason is that because of the development of technology, children now have easy access to the internet. Students who are
addicted to play online games
and watch TV programmes may think studying at school is boring, and therefore, they cannot pay attention to their studies.
点评：
addicted to something
Parents and teachers can take some action to help solve this problem. For example, when students make a mistake, teachers and p
arents tend t
o encourage them and help them find the reason to avoid making the same mistake instead of punishing them. As a result, students, especially those who are shy, may have confidence in studying and are willing to spend time on their studies.
点评：为什么突然说到改错，和前面的段落完全没联系啊
总评：
语法尚可，但是内容不行，观点不怎么搭，复议到
6
分的可能性为
70%
，
前提是当天的地图题没什么太大问题。
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