Beginning: In the future, human have almost used up all resources on the earth and the environment is badly polluted, so humans invented a type of cargo plane with nearly no pollution which needs two pilots to fly. This kind of plane can transport
some
huge parts of equipment which
will
can
be used in building facilities for
the
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cycling
resources
reuse
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why is this important?
It can stay in the air for more than forty days, but it travels extremely slow. In one flight, A and B, the two pilots are flying that kind of cargo plane. On the sky above the Atlantic Ocean, the radio connection with the air traffic controller suddenly breaks off. All communication equipment is shutting down.
Middle: A and B argued about what should they do to survive. They have different ideas. A says to go back to the airport which is only two days. But B says the to follow the navigation system the plane had already set before the malfunction of the equipment which takes about ten more days The first conflict begins later in the sky, two pilots are having more conflicts because the communication system are failed. Although they can live on the sky without any problem for twenty days, but because the fail of communication system, the carbine become a tiny separated island where there are only two man living on it. Later the plane will have more trouble which the two pilots need to work together to overcome them.
i don’t understand why they can’t just land at an airport somewhere or even a large field......all planes have override systems which allow pilots to fly the plane manually.
Resistance: the two pilots are always having some disagreements about the decisions during the flight. And because the failure of the communicative system, they cannot ask the air traffic control about the exact thing they should do.
they don’t t need to do this. the rules of flying are: 1. aviate, 2. navigate, 3. communicate. in that order.
End: They finally reach an airport and their lives are not in danger.
this doesn’t seem a lot different from the last version highlight your changes using a different colour so i can see them. also, i’m not understanding your logic here. this story makes little sense.
