2017年5月13日的学生作文（建议复议）
题目
In some countries its possible to buy the foods transported from all over the world. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh drawback?
学生回忆的作文
In a globalized world ,people can buy foods made in other countries easily . I think it could benefits us easily , although it has some drawbacks.
People can choose different kinds of foods transported from foreign countries because more foreign foods
which could be tr
ansported by planes or trains flow to domestic markets . Residents in China ,for example, can buy apples grown in Tailand and milk from New Zealand easily . When doing some shopping in supermarkets, people can choose what they like .
Another benefit is that people can food
in
lower prices because of the intensive competition between foreign companies and local ones .If foreign companies set branches in local places to make huge profits , it may pose a threat to local companies . In Order to maintain their dominance, local companies are more likely to decrease the prices of food,so Customers can buy th
ose foods in low prices.
However , if more overseas foods appear in domestic markets , Many local companies may go bankrupt . People are more like to buy foreign foods other than local ones i
n the same condition
because these new foods could arouse their interests easily . For instance, people prefer to try milk made in foreign countries because they may think it is safer and more delicious. If le
ss people
buy local foods , many companies which produce these foods may make less profits and finally may
go bankrupt.
In a word ,because of globalization,people can buy foods in lower prices and can have more choices , although it may pose a threat to local companies.
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