【古文风韵】忆当时年华

正文

累世情缘，谁捡起，谁抛下，谁忘前尘，谁总牵挂。

忆当时年华，谁点相思，谁种桃花。

This fated love of forever and a day—

Who has picked it up? Who has thrown it away?  

Who has forgotten it all? Who yearns for it to stay?

Those days bygone and labyrinthine—

Who was the one that made the other sigh and pine?

Who was in the peach orchard, raising flowers divine?

点评

没有复杂的用词，但在音律的铺设上明显很用心思，颇显功力。Labyrinthine（迷宫似的，曲折的）尤其用得妙，一来起韵脚为后面的 pine 和 divine 开道，同时也意喻情缘之纠缠迷醉，一箭双雕。

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