让我们从用词说起
低频词汇 ≠ 优秀表达
高频词汇 ≠ 低质表达
举个栗子
下面这个主体段你会给几分？
At the heart of any discussion regarding an issue pertaining to creating a new holiday, it has to be borne in mind that a delicate line has to be trod when dealing with such matters. The human resources involved in such matters cannot be guaranteed regardless of all the good intentions that may be lavished. While it is true that creating a new holiday might be a viable and laudable remedy, it is transparently clear that applied wrongly such a course of action could be calamitous and compound the problem rather than provide a solution.
但对照5分的标准，这篇只能得到1-2分。
因为它只有语言，没有内容，没有结构。
好的表达还需要“扣题、结构完整、充分阐述和前后连贯”
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关于错误
考官衡量错误，有2个维度：频率和严重性
高分文章—语法错误罕见且不影响理解
低分文章—语法错误频发或影响理解
来看栗子
First fo all, we all live in the realized world, people can respect you unless you want to use correct method to communicate with other people. It is very important, especially in business, if you want to recieve the good resulit, you must tell the ture about your own so that gain the considement.
这段给大家展示
什么是明显错误
如：realized world应替换成reality, real world
people这句逻辑反了
划线处两个主谓句相连却没有连词
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关于论述
充分阐述的主体段＝观点+解释+举例+总结
变化：适度原则＝不过于复杂或单一
举例会被认为是solid development of the idea
与其举名人的例子，不如举自己的例子
与其记美国人的例子，不如记中国人的例子
甚至还可以用虚构的故事，只要合情合理
以满分文的主体段为例
First, confidence is the most important aspect of a friendship or a marriage, or anything like that, so, once it is lost, the whole thing goes down in a way that no one can bear it. To avoid losing confidence, there is only one way, telling the truth, lying will just help throwing it away. For example, a couple decided to go out on the weekend, but the man has a party to go with hix friends to where he can not take his girlfriend and then he lies to her saying that he is sick and can not go to the date. She understands him and they do not see each other in that weekend, but he goes to the party and has much fun. Suppose on monday, the girl talks to a friend that saw him at the party and asked why did not she go with him. She found out the true and all confidence was lost, the basis for their relation is now gone and what happens next is that they break up or if they do not, he will persist on lyes and someday it will end.
满分并不是遥不可及
这篇生活化，真实得让人有代入感的文章
符合ETS对满分的要求
完全扣题
结构完整，论述充分，有适当解释、例子和细节
一致，连贯，并且句式上刻意交替使用
语言平实，偶尔有不明显的错误
做到以上几点，你也能拿满分
