猿辅导三模英语高分作文：漂亮的句子你值得拥有

高考前最后一次实战的英语考试——猿辅导三模刚刚结束。

从小猿拿到的分析数据看，试卷的难度和区分度与高考要求接近，是很好的一次实战机会。而且，考后有详细的诊断报告，相信对于同学们充分了解自己的英语考试能力有所帮助。

英语作文是高考英语中单题占分最大的板块，虽说英语作文也有一定的套路可寻，但大家有没有发现，知难行易，总是写的时候发现表达时突然不知道该用哪个词，不会用地道的、复杂的句式，甚至连几个衔接短语都不太容易用的漂亮。

语言学习是需要长期积累的，要写高分作文，除了掌握“套路”还得多读多看看优秀作品，同样的题目，同样一句话，别人会怎么写，遇到好的表达方式，可以记下来，积累成自己的东西。

下面，我们从猿辅导三模考试中，精选高分作文分享给大家。虽然都是高分，却各有特色，值得阅读学习。

【高分点拨】

2017年高考英语考试说明中对写作的要求是：

1. 准确使用语法和词汇；

2. 使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。

情景包括写作任务的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。

本文时态涉及现在时、将来时。话题是和学生的学习或生活密切相关的内容，贴近学生日常生活，每个学生都会有话要说。题目写作要点有三：1. 简要介绍夏令营的情况；2. 询问目的地的相关情况（如天气）；3. 有空将去拜访。要有条不紊地展开叙述，不要遗漏要点，作文长度控制在100词左右。多于120词或少于80词的，酌情扣分。

长沙市二十中 Magic：

  To start with, I am so delighted that I seized the opportunity to go to London. We intend to stay there for a week. It must be an extraordinary experience. Nevertheless, I dare say that there is something I want to consult you about.

  First of all, never had I been to London before. So how is the weather there? I've heard London rains frequently. But I am unable to make sure. What sort of clothes should I take certainly depends on the weather. What's more, I long to know the places of interest in London as I am extremely obsessed with British Culture! By the way, I will make time for visiting you!

  A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. So this is what a journey means to human beings. I am going to take a single step towards the world and walk a thousand miles to enrich my cognition!

北京大学附属中学 目生：

The summer camp Is for communication between contestant of the International Biology competition.

According to the plan, we will be in London for 5 days , one day for a lecture performed by a famous professor in cancer research ,two days for a recreational knowledge content in cooperation with foreign contestant. The last two days in for review lessons and the official competition. I am confident that my professional Knowledge has prepared me to get a good prize.

Having searched the matters which needs to be considered on the internet, one information is the weather there's bad draws my attention. Due to the fact that I am wondering what items I need to prepare for the bad weather, please tell me what things should be taken into consideration. Eventually, I manage to find time to visit you those days.  I would be grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.

厦门双十中学 青栀：

Now I'm writing to you with anticipation.

    The summer camp, which is held every year, has been to so many places. And when I learned that it was going to London this year, I sign up without hesitation. We will arrive on the July 10th and stay there for a fortnight. By the way, we have the last two days free, so I will visit you when it's convenient.

    Given the fact that this is my first time abroad, I want to know what the weather is like in London then? What should I bring, like sunglasses or umbrella? And I have been attracted by London so long, so I hope you can recommend some places of interest to me.

    I'm looking forward to your early reply, and I can't wait to depart!

湖南益阳一中 南都：

I feel excited and look forward to beginning this camp.

During this camp, I will have opportunities to improve my spoken English in courses provided. Besides, a trip to the famous places of London will certainly add to the fun of the camp. Furthermore, I will learn more details about the history of London.

I heard that the weather there in summer is pretty hot, isn't it? Would you kindly tell me some information of the transportation in London and if there is anything I should pay attention to? I believe your valuable guidance can help with my staying in london.

Will you be available during this time? I may pay a visit to you. I'd appreciate your reply soon.

福建宁德一中 xjs100：

I was so excited that I said yes to it without any fuss. The camp will start right after this final exam which is about absorbing the local culture in London and improving the communicating skills. It's the information on weather and traffic that I wonder. You know, I've never been to other countries before. The weather in London is different from any part of my country so I hope you'll inform me what I should prepare. In the meantime, until now I still cannot imagine the roads in capitalist countries. So I would appreciate it if you send me the description of the roads in your country in detail.

  If it is possible, I'll take a trip to visit your home after the comp, what a nice chance, right?

  I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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