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Nowadays,
there is a large amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think
they have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do
you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that some advertisements targetting at
children should be forbidden to avoid the adverse impact.
From my perspective
，
the advantages of
advertisements overweigh the disadvantages.
this statement is little bit over and i think we
shouldn’t ignore those positive influence of advertising.so i disagree with
that.
As everyone knows,advertisement has already
become a part of our lives which means it can be appeared everywhere and
watched by everyone.so advertising exerts a huge influence on people about all
facets of our lives. Especially for children. they’re so easy to be attracted
by those pictures or cartoons
with strong sound effect and visually appealing images.
what
that
advertisements showed to them.
But it’s not a bad news. a
They
The creative advertising pictures and campaign
can bring lots of wonderful information to
children. sometimes they even can be the key to open children’s minds and
interests. For example,
the illustrations in the educational programs are always
articulated in simple and lively English, it is good opportunity to learn
language while watching advertisements. Additionally,
in
order to appeal the target group, children, those advertisements should add
many elements to cheer children or grab attention of them. therefore most of
them bases on a children style which is much more better to suit children’s
interests and lifestyle than some adults’ advertising. Moreover some
advertising could play a role of educator to teach some right attitudes to
children ,for instance friendship and brave are the most significant factors in
those advertising.
Consequently, the
advertisements are of recreational and educational value.
To be honest, if
there are full of adults’ advertising
in
ad industry it would be horrible. Firstly, it must influence the sale of some children
products. parents are not usually
to
pay much attention to those toys or snacks.
So they tend to buy the products due to the
tempting pictures in the advertisement, some information tends to be
misleading.
Secondly some
adults’ advertising are not such suitable to watch
by
for children.
the way
they show their products
may
by
using some sensitive methods or opinions
which are too mature.
Moreover some advertising could play a role of
educator to teach some right attitudes to children ,for instance friendship and
brave are the most significant factors in those advertising.
这是利
挪上去
All in all
,
In
conclusion,
banning this kind
of advertising is
not
such good way
not appropriate
to protect children,
children should appreciate the positive
advertisements, meanwhile, they should not be misled by them.
People should
supervise them not only refuse them.
逻辑太差
重写
There is considerable debate about whether it leads to a more satisfying
working life when people insist on the career path they decided
early.Considering this issue,It is crucial to explore it from two sides.
这一段要写自己的态度 同不同意
早期职业规划有助于成功的职业生涯。
主题句是
Early career
preparations contribute to a successful career.
In contemporary
settings,
On the one hand,
there are some reasons
which
cause the different opinion to this
view.
回答问题
On the one hand,
Firstly,
It is uneasy to get a stable job and
keep it for long time. People are more likely to taste different feelings of
various jobs.Deciding the future career early and never change it is unwise and
rash.No body can forecast the possibility of the future,so it can not be said
this view is the more satisfied choice.especially with the rapid development of
community,any chance or change would be a turn point.Moreover,It is hard to say
the career path is completely correct.It is reported that a Chinese man changed
various jobs and finally got success depending on the last job.However,he
wasted about 5 years and lots of money in his first job what almost beat him
down.If he insisted on his original choice he would never know the flavor of
victory.
这一段问你 构成职业生涯满意的其他因素
There are other
factors relevant to a successful career.
However,this view is also can be proved.On the one hand,the earlier
people decided the job,the more time they got to struggle for it.To be
specific,it is definitely to know a career deep if you put more time in it.In a
sense,a familiar environment is more satisfied.On the other hand,changing the
minds constantly is a bad sign to one’s career life.for instance,the formal CEO
Mr Jia of LeECO
，
the main factor
caused he
banqueted was he was so into involving in fresh fields so that he could not
focus on one industry.
In conclusion,people should distinguish which is the most suitable
career to themselves,always being cautious to change their jobs and absorbing
the fresh elements of the community.Of course,other ways including working
hard,keeping study,catching
chances
also can get a satisfying working life .
Many museums and historical sites are mainly
visited by tourists and not local people.Why is the case? What can be done to
attract local people?
It’s true that tourists from
many parts of the world
make up a larger proportion to
pay more visits to museums and historical
sites than local people.
That is why I think
some solutions could attracting locals in some practical ways.
There are several reasons for this phenomenon and feasible
measures should be taken for solution.
In my opinion, there are
two main
reasons
lead to
why tourists
prefer
to
visit museum and historical
more
than the local people. Firstly,
Museums is really
similar to residents which the same culture and cuisines.
exhibits in the museums are of little attraction to local
residents because they are familiar with the artistic work or other objects. The
repetition of similar knowledge generates negative emotional response.
Visiting the museums not only like eating
the same dish that they have to eat daily that also they must to spend much
money and it make them feel bored.
中式化表达不要出现。
Secondly, Entrance
tickets price is
highly
high
